Sunday, April 29, 2012

#SixSunday- Silenced (WIP) #2





I trudge to my room crying. The pain flows freely throughout my body. It's attacking my delicate heart that tries so hard to be strong. That’s where it fails. It hurts and, once again, the darkness is getting the best of me. I settle myself down and notice I'm not in my room.

3 comments:

L.J. Kentowski said...

Love this! I can feel her pain! Great description and great 6!

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

Now I need to know where she is. Great six.

Diantha Jones said...

I have no idea if I'm supposed to know what's going on, but the fact that she ends up in destination unknown, makes these six sentences extremely powerful! Love it!

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