Sophie got down on her knees, put her back to the
house, and carefully put her feet through the broken window. She slowly lowered
herself into the basement, being sure to feel the floor before letting go of
the window ledge. She turned around and walked toward the woman.
As Sophie got closer, it seemed the Cambion knew
she was there. It began screaming and it didn't take Eros long to return.
"What a pleasant surprise, Sophie." Eros
said in his rough voice.
5 comments:
Nice six. I got a real feel for the mood from just a short snippet. Keep up the great work. :)
Uh oh, things don't sound very good for Sophie. I'm looking forward to reading more of her adventures.
Oh no! She was caught! Nice six.
Caught! Oh, I want to know how she talks her way out this. Great six!
Great hook. Excellent economy of words.
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