Sunday, May 13, 2012

#SixSunday- Sophie (WIP) #3








Sophie got down on her knees, put her back to the house, and carefully put her feet through the broken window. She slowly lowered herself into the basement, being sure to feel the floor before letting go of the window ledge. She turned around and walked toward the woman.
As Sophie got closer, it seemed the Cambion knew she was there. It began screaming and it didn't take Eros long to return.
"What a pleasant surprise, Sophie." Eros said in his rough voice.

5 comments:

Joya said...

Nice six. I got a real feel for the mood from just a short snippet. Keep up the great work. :)

Jess Schira said...

Uh oh, things don't sound very good for Sophie. I'm looking forward to reading more of her adventures.

Melinda Dozier said...

Oh no! She was caught! Nice six.

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

Caught! Oh, I want to know how she talks her way out this. Great six!

Ernie Laurence, Jr. said...

Great hook. Excellent economy of words.

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